Jay likes Dee
Dee likes Jay
Jay thinks he’s not Dee’s type
Dee thinks she’s in the friend zone
Will they ever work things out?
Here’s their story so far …
one regret (rated S for smutty)
Dinner with friends (Jay & Dee)
Dinner with friends part 2 (Jay & Dee)
Dinner with friends part 3 (Jay & Dee)
nothing personal redux (Jay & Dee)
wishful thinking redux (Jay & Dee)
Friends with benefits? (Jay & Dee)
the rules redux (Jay & Dee) (smutty)
Rule breaker redux (Jay & Dee) (smutty)
Heartbreaker reprise (Jay & Dee)
snog, marry, avoid redux (Jay & Dee)
Friends with benefits redux (Jay & Dee)
drinks with friends (Jay & Dee)
pj party redux (Jay & Dee)(smutty)
Wouldn’t it be nice… (Jay & Dee)
wouldn’t it be nice redux (Jay & Dee)
First Date (Plan A) (Jay & Dee)
March 8, 2017 at 3:31 pm
I enjoyed Tyler and Lily but I have to say Jay and Dee blow them away in my opinion. The connection I had to the characters was just astonishing. I’ve never been in that type of situation but I could see myself from both sides. I enjoy their struggle but I also love that they’re keeping it real with themselves even if the real is lies. The whole story reminds me of of the Whitney Houston song “I Have Nothing”. I hope you come back and continue this story at some point (or publish it. I’d buy it just sayin)! 😀
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March 8, 2017 at 11:58 pm
Thanks for the amazing feedback! Jay and Dee have come a lot further than Lily and Tyler and they are in many ways more fun to write, not so many heavy issues to deal with. There is more for both of them but right now Hot Teacher is begging me to write more. Thanks so much for reading 😀
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March 9, 2017 at 12:13 am
Yes! I am enjoying Hot Teacher so far. You’re really good at setting the tone of your stories and the dynamic between the characters.
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March 9, 2017 at 12:29 am
Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback and really happy you are enjoying my writing 🙂
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